Topic Sentences

1. Johnny Depp is considered a hero because he saved 6 people’s lives. 
2. Another way he shows heroism is by caring for children especially if they are in a hospital. 
3. Johnny is a very respectful man due to his polite behavior with other people and professionals.
4. In conclusion, Johnny is a celebrity that’s considered a hero due to his good personality. 

Final Draft

Rodriguez 1

Maria Fernanda

Mia Tijerina

ELA

November 1, 2011

Johnny Depp Is a Hero

Being a hero takes a lot of guts, and celebrities are considered heroes as well as police or fire men are in reality. Heroes are role models, such as celebrities, that risk their lives for others and care for them as well. One celebrity that shows this kind of behavior is Johnny Depp, a Holly Wood actor, and demonstrates this in various ways. Johnny Depp is considered a hero for the things he has done for others, being a respectful person, and loving and caring for others.

Johnny Depp is considered a hero because he saved 6 people’s lives. Johnny was making some scenes for a new movie that was coming up soon, and a stunt driver accidently sped up. There were 6 others that were turned around, facing another way, and [he]”slammed into the group… shoving them all back.” According to Holly Scoop, “an eyewitness tells British news, News of the World, that this had taken place.” This shows that he is a hero and cares for other people as well.

Another way he shows heroism is by caring for children especially if they are in a hospital. Children need love and someone to care for them, and Johnny shows that he cares for a 17-year-old that was in a coma for five months. According to Look to The Stars, “he was her favorite actor… and her parents hoped that the recorded message [Johnny gave her as a gift]

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would help her wake up.” This was really touching to him and other celebrities as well, so they all helped and cooperated to help other children that were in a coma.

Johnny is a very respectful man due to his polite behavior with other people and professionals. In addition, this shows how he acts or is like, his personality, with other people around him including strangers. An example of this kind of behavior is when he compared a photo-shoot to being raped. According to hollyscoop.com, [he] “doesn’t like photo-shoots at all…it’s almost like being raped…” He also mentioned that [he was] “truly sorry for offending anyone in any way […] I am regretful […] please accept my heartfelt apology.” This concludes that he is respectful and cares about what he says to others.

In conclusion, Johnny is a celebrity that’s considered a hero due to his good personality. Apologizing in front of the interviewers, giving a gift to a girl that was in a coma, and saving 6 people’s life is being heroic. These are some of the things that Johnny has demonstrated to the world, and what a good hero looks like. He is a celebrity that is considered a hero due to all of these things and by being a sweet heart to every one including respecting him and others. 

Works Cited

Works Cited

“Johnny Depp the Hero.” Holly Scoop. April 2008. Web.

Saunders, Tim. “Johnny Depp Gives Wake up Call To Coma Sufferer.” Look To The Stars. April

            2008. Web.

Vanderburg, Madison. Johnny Depp Apologizes for Comparing a Photo-shoot to being raped.  

            Holly Scoop. October 2011.Web.

Thesis Statement

        Prompt #2 
      
          Johnny Depp is a famous actor that is considered a hero for the things he has done for others, being a respectful person, and loving and caring for others. He is the hero everyone looks up to because of the way he acts and would do in order to make things right. People look up to these things because they would want to hang out with someone they can trust. On this case, Johnny Depp is a good example due to his behavior with people and children during presentations, introductions, etc. 

Vocabulary Sentences

1. Something that guides us on proper behavior on the internet is etiquette.
2. Conduct is important because behavior is supposed to be proffesional every where you go.
3. Acting with respect and being polite leads to good courtesy.
4. Alyssa flamed Jackie by writing an inappropriate comment.
5. Something anonymous is unknown or undiscovered.
6. The way you express yourself while writing on something such as facebook or twitter is tone.
7. It was obvious that James had commented on Carla's picture on facebook.
8. On facebook, you can express your emotion or how you are feeling by adding a smiley to your text.
9. When you are asking a aquestion about somewhting weather it's good or bad is called somehting ethical.
10. Linda was talking to her friend on facebook and has unethical behavior.
11. My aunt was sending a picture to my cousin with her and her husband,and was considered legal.

MY FINAL PROJECT

Design cycle slide show

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EVALUATE:

20. How could you improve your presentation?  I think that my presentation needs a little more info on each stage of the design cycle.

21. Does your presentation meet all of the requirements? Yes

22. Share your presentation with at least 2-8^th, 3-9^th, 4-10^th+ friends. What did he/she like about your presentation?

23. Reflect on all the steps of the Design Cycle. What did you do well? What do you need to improve?

24. Were you responsible in using the software, Internet, pictures, and computer?

25. How can my learning help my community?

26. What grade do you deserve on this project? (1 - 6)